Unf! I was expecting it to be good, because it's you and you're always good but this is STELLAR! SUPER! OH MY GOD AWESOME! I loooooooooooove the way you write Luke. You do needy brat very well and I loved how Matt's past played into how unwilling/unable he was at first to control Luke. The opening scene with Luke storming off in just his jeans to the hotel breakfast room was perfect. I could totally see him pulling a stunt like that. And I loved how emotionally manipulative he was in this, because he really does know how to play people like that.
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winterfish
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Date: 2009-12-28 12:03 pm (UTC)THANK YOU!