Date: 2009-12-26 02:18 pm (UTC)
I like this,

Sark appeared to be a complete, and completed, person.

‘Certainly not,’ Sark said,
where Sark is actually replying to a question Weiss asked him at the top of the paragraph but the reader, having been privy to Weiss's musings in the meantime, sees it as a response to those.

Weiss seeing Sark as an angel was very nicely done--poor guy can't help coming back to him time and time again, even though he knows that view is skewed. Damn my love for this pairing now; I'm addicted! <333
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