ext_31878 ([identity profile] kethni.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kethni 2009-04-27 04:34 am (UTC)

Thanks hon! I'm glad it works for you.

I loved how Nathan started to become dependant on Matt and how he used that against him.

Your feedback on Sold really helped with that. It hadn't occurred to me at the time but I think it fits well. I was a little worried how well I could show Nathan's growing dependence but I think it worked okay.

And that poisoning bit was awesome.

Nathan had to be incapacitated long enough for Matt to get to Switzerland - which seems to be at least a 9 hour flight from the US. I did consider Matt smothering Nathan but I think that would have been a step too far for Matt.

This was was a cautionary tale too...You can only kick a dog so much before they turn on you.

Definitely, Nathan was so wrapped up in his little fantasy he total forgot who he was dealing with and how far he was pushing him.

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